Stories and Poems from the Writers' Critique Group of First Reformed Church, Schenectady, New York

Month: December 2023

Deck the Halls

By Kathy Petersen.

“Let’s get this tree decorated, girls” Jenna commanded. In the family room, Carl was finishing the lights. Syrupy Christmas music oozed from the TV.

Jenna selected an ornament and hung it. Carl’s eyes met hers through a screen of boughs. Oh, God, she thought, I love this man so much. She held out her arms. Carl came into them, and they began a slow dance among the boxes.

Chrissie collapsed beside the dog and started to twiddle his ears. Sandy reclaimed the book she’d been reading. Rachel sighed theatrically and stomped into the kitchen for a soda.

Their parents danced.

Comparative Career Studies

By Rudy Petersen.

Without meaning to eavesdrop, I overheard an interesting conversation at lunch today in Gershon’s Deli. One woman asked another woman, “So, how are your daughters doing in college?”

The second woman enthused, “Oh, they are both home for Christmas and comparing notes. Susie said she enjoys her Early Childhood Development classes at SUNY Albany, and Claire said she learns ever so much in her Wildlife Management classes at Paul Smith College.”

The first woman commented, “I can see how the practices they are studying could be applied very well in either career!”

The second woman, after a beat, said, “Indeed.”

A Little Sister

By Kathy Petersen.

Hailey stood in line waiting to see Santa Claus at the mall. She privately doubted that seeing Santa was going to work. Still, when her turn came, she stood beside his knee while the elf took a picture and told Santa that her name was Hailey, and she was five years old.

“And what would you like for Christmas, Hailey?” the man in red asked.

“A little sister,” Hailey said. “And can you really do it this time? I asked last year, and I didn’t get one.”

Santa’s lips formed a round O while he thought. “I can try,” he said. “But a little sister isn’t always easy. Is there something else you might like, just in case?”

“Maybe a doll,” Hailey said unwillingly. “But it wouldn’t be the same.”

Santa patted her head, wished her a MERRR-RY Christmas, and sent her back to her mother, reminding her to get a lollipop from the elf’s basket.

Riding home, Hailey observed her mother closely. Her friend Audrey in kindergarten got a little brother for her birthday — not a little sister, but close. Audrey’s mother had been very fat for a while, and then there was the little brother. The two events seemed somehow connected. Hailey was watching her mother to get fat, but it wasn’t happening. She had no idea how long these things took, but it was getting very close to Christmas. In Hailey’s opinion the chances didn’t look good. She was preparing for another year of disappointment.

In fact, none of the usual Christmas things were happening. Shopping, baking, putting up the fragrant fresh-cut tree — none of that was going on.

“Are we even going to have Christmas?” she asked her mother.

“We’re doing something different this year,” her mother promised. “We’re taking a vacation. It’ll be nice, you’ll see.” This sounded sort of interesting, but Hailey wondered, how can anything be nicer than Christmas?

School vacation started. Hailey’s mother started packing suitcases. On a snowy morning, just days before Christmas, Hailey’s father drove them to the airport, and they all got onto a plane. This was completely unexpected, and Hailey was fascinated until she fell asleep.

They arrived at a different airport, where a huge banner hung in the concourse. Hailey’s father read it to her: Welcome to Seoul. “We’re in a different country,” he explained. “The people speak a different language, but they still have Christmas.”

To Hailey, the Christmas lights on their cab ride to the hotel spoke all the language she needed. Bouncing in her seat she pointed out marvels to her parents—tall buildings covered with lights, trees wrapped in lights, a church decorated with a huge cross ablaze in red neon. A little snow on the ground reminded Hailey of home. She didn’t feel a bit homesick, not the way she felt when she sometimes stayed with her grandparents; her parents were with her for this adventure. All she needed was a little sister. Even though they passed store after beautifully decorated store, something told her that they couldn’t just go shopping for a sister. This year, the lights would have to be enough.

The hotel was sponsoring a doll show; the lobby was full of dolls. I wonder if I’ll get to pick one out? Hailey dreamed. Santa thought a doll would be nice.  Maybe he was right. To her disappointment she wasn’t invited to select a doll. Instead, the family had supper in their room and then went straight to bed. Hailey felt a little grumpy. If her mother wasn’t going to get fat and give her a little sister, she should at least get to choose a doll.

After breakfast they all piled into another cab. Their luggage stayed at the hotel, but her father inexplicably carried a briefcase like the one he took to the office. “Daddy, are you going to work?” she asked.

“No, sweetheart. We just have to bring some papers with us,” he said.

The cab let them off at another colorfully lighted building. It seemed to be full of little children, reminding Hailey of the day care center she used to attend. Her family stopped at a counter, and a lot of papers went back and forth. Then they were shown into a big echoing room with a Christmas tree in one corner. A woman wearing a pink dress that reached right down to her shoes came from a doorway, leading a tiny girl, black-haired and almond-eyed, dressed in blue. She brought her directly to Hailey’s parents, let go of the child’s hand, said a few words, and stepped back.

They all stood silently for a few seconds. Then Hailey’s mother started to cry, and even her father’s eyes became suspiciously moist. The tiny child looked from one to the other, seemed to absorb the atmosphere, and clouded up.

Instantly Hailey took charge. She reached out to hug the little girl, the frightened toddler who understood nothing and didn’t even speak their language. She felt warm little arms wrap around her neck and felt the trembling little body pressed against hers. Suddenly her parents were on their knees, her father enclosing all of them in his arms, and everyone was laughing and crying at once.

“This is your sister,” her mother said. “Her name is Lin.”

Hailey stepped back, utterly confused. “How . . . ?” she asked. “You didn’t even get fat.”

“She’s a gift,” her mother said. “Lin had no family, no one to take care of her, so the people here are giving her to us.”

“Does that mean we can keep her?”

“Forever,” her mother said.

Hailey heard music playing. It sounded strange, twangy, and tuneless, but she knew what music was for. She caught Lin’s hands, and they danced, danced until they fell and lay giggling helplessly. Then her father lifted them up, took Lin on his shoulder and Hailey by the hand, and they all went out into the falling snow.

Arise, Shine, For Your Light Has Come

By James Gonda.

The baby’s cry filled the sanctuary, a reminder of birth, life, and devotion.

Joseph and Mary, following Jewish customs, brought the infant to the temple in Jerusalem to present him to the Lord. The temple’s air hung heavy with the scent of burning incense. Intricate carvings and inscriptions adorned the walls. Its altar was a threshold between the mundane and the sacred.

Meanwhile, the Holy Spirit had guided Simeon, a pillar of faith within the community. From a young age, he had dedicated himself to a life of piety and prayer. He was a respected figure in the temple; his deep spirituality drew the attention of those around him. Simeon had also received a divine pledge that he would not die before seeing the Messiah. When he saw the baby that day, he cradled it in his arms and blessed God, praising Him for fulfilling the promise of sending the Savior.

Anna, a prophetess, was also in the temple. She approached Joseph and Mary and gave thanks to God. She was a woman of wisdom and insight. She had maintained a connection to the spiritual realm throughout her life. Widowed at an early age, she devoted herself to fasting, prayer, and service in the temple. Also known for her visionary gifts, she became a fountain of hope for those seeking comfort and guidance. Her presence in the temple that day was intentional—it came from a life of listening to the whispers of the divine. When she approached Joseph and Mary, her words affirmed the child was the long-awaited Messiah.

                                                                ***

A decade later, Simeon and Anna found solace in a quiet corner of the city. The air in Jerusalem was cool and crisp under the starry sky. The street murmurs had subsided, leaving room for the distant echo of night creatures. The pair had settled on a weathered stone bench; the temple loomed in the distance.

Simeon turned to Anna and spoke in a gentle rumble. “Do you remember when we first met the infant Jesus?”

She smiled. “I shall never forget. A presence beyond words charged the air, as if the cosmos itself bowed to the child.”

Simeon’s eyes sparkled with memories of the meeting. “The divine promise, in the arms of a couple from Nazareth. He leaned forward, his demeanor fraught with apprehension. “Anna, in my dreams, I see the child growing, his path marked by shadows and light.”

It was a full moon that night. A silvery glow illuminated the lines on their faces and the furrows of their brows.

“I, too, have dreamt of the child,” Anna said. “In my visions, I see threads connecting him to the hearts of many—a plethora of lives touched by divinity.”  

Simeon pondered her words for a short time. Then: “What is the child’s destiny, Anna?” His question lingered in the air; the word ‘destiny’ pregnant with possibilities.

Anna’s eyes held a distant gaze, as if peering into the beyond. “His destiny is to awaken the dormant light within every soul. To be a beacon that guides humanity from darkness into love.”  

Simeon kicked up a few pieces of gravel. “What if humanity’s darkness overwhelms the light? What if his beacon becomes a flicker?”

Anna looked at him. “Dear friend, I believe we are trustees of a truth that transcends time.”

The stars above, scattered like celestial witnesses, bore witness to their pact.

Simeon said, “Then we’re trustees of a fragile flame threatened by encroaching gloom. What if, despite his best efforts, evil prevails? What if the dark forces prove too formidable?”                                                                     

Anna placed her hand on his shoulder. “Simeon, faith is the anchor that steadies our hearts amid fear and doubt. The child, now a boy, carries within him a resilience beyond our understanding. The shadows may twist and bend, but they cannot extinguish his flame.”

“Hmm.” Simeon remained incredulous.

As they continued their back and forth under the moon and stars, a soft breeze rustled through the passageways of Jerusalem.

Then without preamble, a brilliance enveloped them. The night sky transformed into a canvas of silver and gold, casting an ethereal glow over their nook. For a few seconds Simeon and Anna found themselves blinded by the display. Then they rose from the bench, startled.

They fixated on the sight unfolding above. Simeon’s countenance gave way to a childlike wonder. He reached for Anna’s hand, seeking reassurance during this spectacle from another world. Caught off guard, Anna felt her heart racing. Her eyes shimmered with enchantment.

The weight of the moment pressed upon them. They exchanged glances that acknowledged the extraordinary encounter they were witnessing. In that sacred space, time seemed to lose its grip. The boundary between the normal and the paranormal blurred as Simeon and Anna permitted the glow to encase them.

From the midst of the radiance emerged an angelic being. Its outstretched wings cast a luminous aura. Simeon and Anna fell to their knees. Its voice was gentle yet powerful. “Simeon, Anna, your faith has been steadfast and your hearts true. You indeed met the Messiah in the temple. Please know his destiny is woven into the fabric of the universe, beyond the reach of mortals. Fear not, for the light he carries will outshine the boundaries of time. The shadows may attempt to obscure, but his flame is eternal.”

With those words, the display reached a crescendo. It bathed Simeon and Anna in a shower of radiant stardust. Then as quickly as the brilliance had appeared, it receded, leaving the night sky in a serene, starlit beauty.

Simeon and Anna stayed on their knees for a moment, absorbing the celestial encounter.

A profound peace settled within their hearts.

Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer Deconstructed

By Rudy Petersen.

Sure, you’ve heard the song dozens—if not hundreds—of times.

Let’s revisit the lyrics once more and then address some ethical questions.

You know Dasher and Dancer
And Prancer and Vixen,
Comet and Cupid
And Donner and Blitzen.
But do you recall
The most famous reindeer of all?

Rudolph the red-nosed reindeer
Had a very shiny nose
And if you ever saw it
You would even say it glows.

All of the other reindeer
Used to laugh and call him names
They never let poor Rudolph
Join in any reindeer games.

Then one foggy Christmas Eve
Santa came to say
Rudolph with your nose so bright
Won’t you guide my sleigh tonight?
Then all the reindeer loved him
And they shouted out with glee
“Rudolph the red-nosed reindeer
You’ll go down in history.”

OK, there it is, the whole tacky story in 113 simple English words. You, perhaps, may have seen the movie, which seeks to offer a back-story to the song. Now I must ask: have you ever really considered what is going on here—socially, ethically—regarding common decency toward other individuals? If not, then I suggest the key questions before us are these:

Item: Are the other reindeer immature and/or naive?                                   Hint: instead of getting ready for work on Christmas Eve, they’re playing games.

Item: Are the other reindeer a gang of bullies?
Hint: They habitually have been laughing at Rudolph and calling him names. 

Item: Are the other reindeer hypocrites?
Hint: When Rudolph’s “nose so bright” leads the way, thereby saving the jobs of the entire team, then they all “loved” him. Hmm.

Item: What is the nature of love in this song?                                                   Hint: Does the love seem superficial, tied only to a hope of sharing the glory—in effect, sucking up to Rudolph to get to Santa himself?

Item: What is Santa’s proper role in this situation?
Hint: He’s the boss, the head honcho, the leader. Does he not have a responsibility to use this episode as a teaching moment?

Item: Have the other reindeer reached an epiphany, or will they revert to their former behavior?
Hint: We hear the song, and probably see the movie every Christmas season, and yet the story never changes. Why not?

I have considered traveling to the North Pole and confronting the reindeer gang to press them on these points, but I suspect they would give me little or no satisfaction. I might interview Santa, and possibly Mrs. Claus, but I anticipate getting nothing but jolly elf-twaddle about it all being in “fun”—you know, the sweetness and light approach—always a good dodge.

So, I’ll leave this matter to you to ponder. Why do so many citizens greet the annual holiday with fond recollection of this most suspect of popular tunes? Is it tradition? Is it raw sentimentality? Bah humbug! I say.

I realize that these are not issues that you, or even us working together, can resolve. But I thank you for staying with me on this important cultural issue. I feel so much better now.

In Search of Santa’s List

By James Gonda.

It was the week before Christmas and the North Pole was a blizzard of activity. Santa’s workshop was a cacophony of clanking and clattering, buzzing, beeping, humming, and hissing. Santa and Mrs. Claus were making their final preparations for the big night: checking the weather, planning Santa’s route, and sorting stocking stuffers with their army of elves.   

During the cheerful chaos, Mrs. Claus found herself in a crisis—she had misplaced Santa’s naughty and nice list. As she searched the nooks and crannies of their home and office, panic set in. She could not find the list anywhere. Mrs. Claus, known for her meticulous organization, felt distressed. She had kept the list safe for centuries; now in those crucial days before Christmas, it had vanished.

Santa, always jovial, reassured his missus they would find the list together. They began their quest by retracing Mrs. Claus’ steps. The workshop, the kitchen, the factory—all the usual places. Yet, the list remained unfound. As they pondered their next move, an elf suggested seeking guidance from Frosty the Snowman—he had a reputation for curating information about the North Pole.

Trudging through the snow, Santa and Mrs. Claus stumbled upon the pudgy snowman with a top hat and carrot nose. With great interest Frosty listened to their plight of the missing list. His coal eyes gleamed with concern. “I haven’t seen your list but heard rumors of a mischievous penguin who might know something.” He motioned toward the Iceberg Isle.

With renewed hope, Santa and Mrs. Claus set off for the island’s icy shores. There, they encountered Pip, a penguin with a penchant for pranks. Pip confessed he had seen the list but claimed the wind had “carried it away.”

Santa and Mrs. Claus decided to enlist the little bird’s help. Together, they embarked on a journey, pursuing the list through a snowy landscape, across a frozen lake, and into a candy cane forest where trees sparkled with red and white delights.

Their first stop unfolded in a clearing with fairy lights. Jingles, a reindeer, pranced into view, his fur aglow with a shimmer. With a flourish, he executed flips and spins. The air crackled with energy as he landed with grace. “Santa! Mrs. Claus! And Pip! What a surprise! Welcome to my Winter Circus!” His hooves tapped out a festive rhythm. “Word travels fast in these parts—I heard about your elusive list.” Santa chuckled. “Oh yes, thank you, Jingles! We’ve always admired your hoof work. Any help is much appreciated.”

Jingles winked and, with a twirl, uncovered a secret hollow under the snow. It revealed an array of glittering snowflakes, each etched with the names of children around the world. This information might help Santa remember who was naughty and who was nice. Meanwhile, Pip, unable to forego a little fun, flopped onto the ground and created a snow angel. Laughter echoed through the clearing. “Jingles, you’ve given us some relief. Thank you,” Mrs. Claus said.

As they continued their search, the trio reached the edge of a frozen lake. Bumble, a polar bear, awaited them. His fur glistened like ice. “Well, well, if it isn’t the Claus crew! What brings you to my chilly domain?”

Mrs. Claus explained their quest. The giant white bear rubbed his paws together, contemplating. “A missing list, you say? Well, Bumble’s got connections with squalls and gales. Sometimes they share their secrets.” With a grand gesture, he summoned the winds; they swirled around with snippets of conversations. The air teased Santa’s beard and played with the edges of Mrs. Claus’ shawl.

“The list, my friends, is on an adventure of its own,” the bear revealed. “Follow the whispers, and you’ll find it.”

They thanked Bumble and ventured forth. The scent of warm gingerbread teased their noses. It led them to a village of gingerbread people. The aroma of baked cookies filled the air; the town square was a sweet display of icing-adorned houses. Mr. Gingersnap, a plump gingerbread man, welcomed them with a broad smile. “Santa, Mrs. Claus, and little Pip! You look like you could use a break. How ‘bout some hot cocoa and gingerbread cookies?”

The warmth of hospitality enveloped them as they sat around a cozy fire. They sipped hot chocolate and nibbled on cookies shaped like Christmas trees. As the night unfolded, a gust of wind delivered a brass key. Mr. Gingersnap snatched the key and handed it to Santa. “This key opens the door to the heart of the forest. Your list awaits there.”

The three ventured deeper into the woods. Snow crunched beneath their boots. The forest grew denser; trees towered overhead like sentinels guarding a secret. Following the whispers of the wind—per Bumble’s instructions—they came upon a clearing bathed in a soft glow. In the center stood an ancient, ornate door, adorned with intricate patterns. Santa inserted the golden key. The door creaked open and revealed a room resplendent with thousands of twinkling stars. In the center was the missing list, suspended in mid-air, surrounded by an aura. A sense of celebration radiated from the space, as if the list itself delighted in being found.

Mrs. Claus approached the list, her eyes filled with wonder. The names of children glittered like constellations. But before they could rejoice, a figure emerged from the shadows—a being arrayed in an iridescent cloak, resembling the hues of peacock feathers. The being smiled. “Congratulations, dear Claus family, and Pip. You’ve passed the final test.”

Mrs. Claus looked at her husband, puzzled. “Who is this, Papa?”

Santa chuckled. “This is the Guardian of Christmas Magic.”

“You know this . . . individual?”

“We go back to the beginning.” 

The being spoke: “You’ve undertaken a journey, met characters, faced challenges—”

“The list was missing! We were worried!” Mrs. Claus inserted.

The Guardian nodded. “Indeed, such events reveal the essence of Christmas. The joy, the laughter, the warmth, and the spirit of giving were all present in your hearts, even when the list seemed lost.” And with those words, the being eased into an adjacent room. The list floated down into Mrs. Claus’ hands.

And so, on Christmas Eve, as Santa soared through the sky, the Northern Lights shimmered even brighter, personifying the holiday bliss the Clauses—and Pip—had rediscovered on their search.   

But My Pastor Said!

By John Hargraves.

It was my first new car – a banging 1981 white Toyota Celica GT coupe with a 5-speed stick, blue herringbone seats and a center console 6-band stereo equalizer. I loved that car.

So, I kept it clean and paid close attention to imperfections. One day I noticed a slow leak in the left front tire and dropped it off at the Mobil station where they actually still did mechanical repairs. My office was only two minutes away.

Not too long after I returned my clinic, the mechanic called me. Sotto voce, he asked me to come back to the station right away. There had been an accident.

Soon on the scene, I discovered an elderly woman in the driver’s seat of a hulking green Buick LeSabre. After getting her tank filled, she had confused the gas pedal with the brake pedal. The mechanic had parked my baby Celica perpendicular to the pumps and she had broadsided it. I was astonished to see the GT’s width reduced to three feet and only the console’s equalizer appeared to be spared. The heavy chrome front bumper of the Buick had made a Jell-O mold out of the side of my car.  

The white-haired woman behind the wheel was a bit dazed but apologetic. I sublimated my nausea and channeled the good doctor. Discovering she was diabetic, I summoned a sugary coke from the mechanic, and she reconstituted. She was otherwise intact and fortunately had her seat belt fastened. Looking back now, I’m surprised that the mechanic did not call for paramedics. I guess he was killing two birds with one stone. 

The woman and I exchanged insurances, license information and phone numbers. The mechanic requested that I pay for my tire repair, eight dollars and change. The fact that I paid him is a testimony to the shade of chartreuse signifying how green I was.

Days later I learned my Celica was totaled out by my insurance company.  I ordered a new car which would take six weeks to arrive.  In the meantime, I had to rent a vehicle for $10 a day but had no rental coverage. 

I decided to call the woman who destroyed my car to see how she was doing. She was overjoyed to hear from me and thanked me profusely for attending to her at the accident. When she heard I’d be out $10 a day for six weeks, she said that the least she could do was pay me back by covering the rental costs. She insisted I come by her house the next day to make me lunch and pick up the cash. She told me she was a church goer, and this was the right thing to do. It felt good that this wasn’t just about a car accident anymore.

The next day she called me back right before lunch time. Sounding uncomfortable but firm, she told me I could not come by and that she would not be reimbursing my expenses. She had consulted with her pastor about what had transpired. He advised and warned her against opening the door to the admission of fault with her gestures.

“Really?” was about all I could muster. 

“But my pastor said!” she replied.